au, its quite nice sorry for late remark bt i believe the vogue word now looks like a title for the article, and that doesnt really stick to true/false concept. What can we do ab it?
m, good point! but i think it's fine still. i dont think the idea would work if without the title. coz i want to show the audiences--the activity is just like vogue nowaday, to teach female all the thing they'd like to know. so id say i will keep it.thanx maria.
i see. doesnt it resemble vogue without being named?the layout is pretty voguee. another thing - we might not to be allowed to use their brand without their permission, need to check.
Cool, I like it but I think Maria maybe has a point about using the Vouge word cos maybe it seems like we are doing something about Vogue but its actually the mask and the women's female secret society. I like it, but I liked your original idea with the women in the forest dancing, watching TV and reading Vogue much more and think its a shame that u gave up on that wonderful concept cos I would be much more curious if i saw women in masks doing weird things in the forest then an Vogue cover, but now there is little time so maybe just use your headline "secret women's society" instead of the Vogue word?
I like it! I think its nice that u used the Vogue font for the headline and wrote V&A instead and i really like that u're work looks more painted, nice!
au, its quite nice
ReplyDeletesorry for late remark bt i believe the vogue word now looks like a title for the article, and that doesnt really stick to true/false concept. What can we do ab it?
Maria
m, good point! but i think it's fine still. i dont think the idea would work if without the title. coz i want to show the audiences--the activity is just like vogue nowaday, to teach female all the thing they'd like to know. so id say i will keep it.thanx maria.
ReplyDeletei see. doesnt it resemble vogue without being named?the layout is pretty voguee.
ReplyDeleteanother thing - we might not to be allowed to use their brand without their permission, need to check.
Cool, I like it but I think Maria maybe has a point about using the Vouge word cos maybe it seems like we are doing something about Vogue but its actually the mask and the women's female secret society. I like it, but I liked your original idea with the women in the forest dancing, watching TV and reading Vogue much more and think its a shame that u gave up on that wonderful concept cos I would be much more curious if i saw women in masks doing weird things in the forest then an Vogue cover, but now there is little time so maybe just use your headline "secret women's society" instead of the Vogue word?
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mm, ill try few works to change the title now(by hand drawing...let's see if it work)and put them here later! thanx!
ReplyDeletewicked! :) Just be as fast as u can cos amey is waiting for our finals, without them he can't do anything.
ReplyDelete/Åsa
ok. how about those new works now?
ReplyDeletehi again!
ReplyDeleteI like it! I think its nice that u used the Vogue font for the headline and wrote V&A instead and i really like that u're work looks more painted, nice!
/Åsa