Cool! Thanks Maria! :) I don't know, maybe. but i don't think "Tsar's room for fun" sounds very action or dramatic, it doesn't say very much about the story, maybe just add ""Tsar's Bloody fun room" or..
"tsar's torture room explored" or "tsar feed his pet with humans" or "tsar fed his enemies to his bear" or "the bloody and brutal truth about Tsars fun room"
I don't know really, its hard, but I think Jake was right, we have to be more exiting and its a really good exiting the story u gat there so we should try n nail that with the title :) People should get curious when they hear the title. Hope that was any help... I am struggling with my titles as well.
But hey, if your image is very dramatic/exiting then i think your title will work :) My images are not very dramatic so i need to spice up my titles and i am stuck with it so any ideas are welcome
deadly thin sounds nice . . and i like tsars title also :)
ReplyDeleteCool! Thanks Maria! :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know, maybe. but i don't think "Tsar's room for fun" sounds very action or dramatic, it doesn't say very much about the story, maybe just add ""Tsar's Bloody fun room" or..
"tsar's torture room explored"
or
"tsar feed his pet with humans"
or
"tsar fed his enemies to his bear"
or
"the bloody and brutal truth about Tsars fun room"
I don't know really, its hard, but I think Jake was right, we have to be more exiting and its a really good exiting the story u gat there so we should try n nail that with the title :) People should get curious when they hear the title. Hope that was any help... I am struggling with my titles as well.
/ Åsa
But hey, if your image is very dramatic/exiting then i think your title will work :) My images are not very dramatic so i need to spice up my titles and i am stuck with it so any ideas are welcome
ReplyDelete/Åsa
we can use "the bloody and brutal truth about Tsars fun room" in subheadline, like the jist of the article.
ReplyDeletehope u'll find the image dramatic enough;)
Maria
yeah thats a good one! :)
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